The night at the Decoy

It was a no moon that night, and amidst the eerie darkness and the howling winds, a beam of light  was seen dispelling the darkness.

It was Jiah, rushing home .

‘ Mum must be tensed, at least I should inform her that I’m on the way home’ she thought.

She stopped the scooter to call home. All of a sudden, she heard a faint cry, It sounded something familiar yet mysterious. Then she heard it again.

” No, it doesn’t sound like  a baby…it’s more like that of a big an ostrich or an emu..” She thought. She was amazed at the prospect of an ostrich at the mansion nearby, from which the sound seemed to emanate.

Lured to check it out, she started towards the gate of the mansion. She hadn’t seen such a huge and beautiful house all her life. As she was lost in the thoughts of the mansion and the cries, Suddenly, the gate slid open as if prompting her to enter.

” It’s the Wind, maybe.” Jiah thought.

The aura of the place seemed to beckon her. She stepped inside in a trance. Strong fragrance of roses hung in the air. Half consciously, she walked up to the front door. It was a huge wooden double door, intricately carved at the corners, with a mysterious knocker and a fascinating door handle.She especially liked the hand palm shaped door handle , open wide, reckoning her to hold it .
Then out of the blue, the sound came again, clear and distinct. But now the cry sounded more like that of a woman.She was pondering over this when the loud ringing of her phone broke her flow if thoughts. It was her tensed mother calling to inquire about her whereabout. Jiah, who was  till now smitten by the aura of the mansion, got back to square one where she had to get back home.

“Sorry mom, I’ll be home in a jiffy.” She replied hurriedly and hung up the call. She had just started back towards the gate, when the door cracked open and someone pulled Jiah inside.

Jiah was thrown onto the floor. The person who pulled her was a middle-aged lady with a menacing face and evil glaring eyes. Her stare frightened Jiah at the core. The lady started laughing hysterically.

“Hahaa! Jigar dear, come here! See I have caught some fresh young blood.
Hahaah!!”  the lady called out.

Mortified amidst the cacophony of laughter, Jiah was still digesting what had happened within seconds. Then she remembered her phone. Where was it?

There it was, lying near the door. Jiah rushed to pick it up but she slipped and fell back down.

From over the stairs,a tall dark figure descended. Reeking in pain, Jiah tried to get up but she couldn’t move. She felt fastened onto the floor with fear, her body just wasn’t obeying her orders. With her heart beating wildly, Jiah panicked.

As Jigar advanced towards her, she tried harder to get out of the freaking  place, away from those horrid people. But her every effort was going futile. Anger and disappointment descended over her and she started screaming hysterically and then the hell broke loose.

Jiah was picked up and thrown into the dungeon. She landed hard on something. The door was locked from outside and Jiah was left to live her last breaths. Tired from crying and screaming madly, Jiah now tried to move aside the painful thing on which she had landed. It was then she realized what it was.. A BONE.

Appalled by the horrendous view, Jiah fainted.It was after full two hours Jiah woke up with a killing headache. Her head was still going dizzy when she saw Jigar standing beside her. She was about to scream again but her mouth was stuffed with cloth before she could react. Then Jigar started speaking hurriedly.

” Don’t be afraid. Take me as a friend..shh..calm down, I mean no harm.”

Dumbfounded, Jiah looked at his face. He continued:

“I’m Jigar. I’m really sorry about my mother’s behavior. she is not in her senses right now. She is a mental patient- she has delusion disorder. She thinks herself to be a cannibal. She wants to sacrifice you to please them…..I ..I’m so sorry…….Ok now, you need to get outta here before she gets here. Cooperate with me and please don’t scream when I take this cloth out.”

Jigar helped her to get up. Now, she saw skeletons all over the room. Horrified, She was about to scream again but Jigar muffled her. Once out of the dungeon, they entered the living room. The door  to Jiah’s freedom was right in front of her. They tiptoed towards the door. Jigar handed Jiah her cellphone and was about to open the door, when they heard a blood curling scream.

Jigar’s mom had seen what was happening. She  rushed towards them. Seeing her inching closer, Jiah furiously tugged at the door. It simply wouldn’t budge. She pushed harder and this time her efforts paid off. But before she could step out, the lady grabbed her hand and hauled her inside.

Jigar stood stunned, watching all this in utter guilt. He couldn’t save yet another victim.

The lady threw Jiah into a pentagonal pattern drawn with blood and lined with candles all over. It was filled with strange black coloured water, both sticky and slimy. Jiah got covered with this goo which restricted her movement but she was determined to save her life.

Now the lady turned to Jigar and started shouting at him wildly . Jigar tried to reason her , “Mom, this girl is not fit for it… I didn’t want it to go all wrong!”

While Jigar kept her busy in the argument, Jiah turned to her phone for help. Thinking wittily, she texted her location to her mother. It was then she noticed the dagger in the lady’s left hand. she Immediately , she grabbed a candle and threw it at the lady. It hit her on the head. Outraged, she turned back and advanced towards Jiah.

“what are you trying to do you stupid thing! Don’t you realize how lucky you are that I selected you to please the demons. I shall purify you and then..”  she sneered, now at eye level with Jiah.

This was exactly what Jiah wanted. She wasted no time and jabbed her cellphone right in the lady’s eye and as the lady shrieked out in pain, she snatched the dagger .

Taking advantage of the opportunity, Jiah got up and ran towards the  door. She grabbed the door knob and pushed with all her might but in vain. Then she realized that it was locked. Panic stricken, she called out to Jigar for help. “Jigar, bring the key!”

The lady looked up in shock and pushed her son away. Jigar hit his head in the mantelpiece and fainted.Oblivious of her son’s injury, the lady howled, ” You think you can go out so easily?   Would  I let that happen after your first try?!” The lady advanced towards Jiah.

“Dare you come near me..I’m warning you… I .. I ..I”ll stab you” Jiah warned.

“Hahahha…..oohh, I’m so scared.. someone save me..” the lady sneered again.

Suddenly, the police sirens were heard. The police had entered the main gate.

The lady panicked and ran to get hold of Jiah. She got hold of her arm and started dragging her back to the dungeon but Jiah stabbed her hand. But the lady was undeterred, she didn’t give up her efforts to put Jiah back in the dungeon.

On the other side, police threw open the door and entered the living room. They overpowered the lady and took her in their custody. Jiah was rescued and sent to her mother.

A few days later at the Rehab centre of the hospital:

“Jiah darling, the doctor has agreed to discharge you tomorrow… you can finally come home” said her mother, hugging her.

“Mom, what happened to them? Did they send her to asylum?” Jiah asked.

“Yes, dear that woman needs some serious medication.You stop thinking about them. Rest.” Her mom replied.

“And what about Jigar?” she asked again.

“Now, this should be your last question. Ok? Hmm..that poor guy is in coma. He hit his head real hard that day.You take these medicines and go to sleep.”  her mother said kissing her forehead.

This time she really tried to forget  and sleep.

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  1. Don't Get Wasted · January 5, 2015

    Clean Hargun. Real clean. I liked it a lot. Congrats.


  2. Aeby Gupta · February 5, 2015

    U hav a convincing hand ovr fiction….
    N ur wordz carriez ur effort along..
    quiet gud wid d climax, was able to bind me till d end….

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  3. Ranju · April 2, 2015

    Awesome Hargun! 😀 This was a different story and held me until the very end. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Prateek Kohli · April 3, 2015

    I read the whole story while sitting on the edge of my chair! Kudoz to your creativity. Loved it 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Tanveer Rauf · August 24, 2015

    oh my god, what a dreadful horrifying interesting story 🙂 yeah would love to read more of your stories 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Tejaswi · August 31, 2015

    Wonderful imagination 😀 I guess your writing will get more and more refined along the way 🙂 good one..

    Liked by 1 person

  7. shanx · September 1, 2015

    I am glad it didn’t end up being another cliche. The ambience and the flow is well carried Hargun. However, I am baffled as to why Jiah was in Rehab later? Did I miss something? Let me know. best wishes.

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    • Hargun Wahi · September 3, 2015

      Thanks a lot . I’m glad you liked it 🙂
      Jiah was traumatised after what had happened with her that night. All those gruelling experiences in the dungeons and then in the lobby had left a frightening mark on her,Though she acted smartly in the need of the hour.
      To recover from the same and the bruises she had had, she was admitted to the same.

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      • shanx · September 3, 2015

        Thanks Hargun for explaining. Jiah being sent to her mom after rather than rushing her to care.. made me think otherwise.. and then mom going and meeting her later.. a lil baffled. (For a moment, I thought it was all in Jiah’s head and her mom was coping with her. That would have been hell of a twist too 😉 ) Makes perfect sense. Wonderfully weaved. Cheers.

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        • Hargun Wahi · September 3, 2015

          Yeah, that would have been quite a twist 😉
          Thanks a lot for a lovely comment and the appreciation. Cheers!

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  8. Pratik Akkawar · September 3, 2015

    Honestly speaking, I had not expected that twist at the end which turned the whole story upside down. 😀 Well done Hargun!!! I will suggest you to try your hands on a long story like a novel. Keep writing and best wishes. 🙂

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    • Hargun Wahi · September 3, 2015

      Thanks a lot. I’m glad you enjoyed the tale.
      And yes, writing novels requires a lot of patience, perseverance,and consistent efforts. But still, I think I’ll do write one when the time is right 😉
      Thanks again for a lovely comment and good wishes 🙂

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  9. thatgirlkimaya · September 5, 2015

    Amazing! 🙂 I wonder if you’d mind checking out my blog, too? 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  10. Hargun Wahi · September 5, 2015

    Sure! I’ll be there soon.
    Thanks a lot for stopping by!


  11. Saiz · September 6, 2015

    Imaginative. Purely imaginative. Greatly imaginative.
    You deserve more than words really. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  12. Hargun Wahi · September 8, 2015

    Thanks a lot Saiz! I’m glad you enjoyed the story.
    Keep enjoying my stories 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  13. Faraday's Candle · September 10, 2015

    Awesome plot twist. Your able to express your imagination brilliantly!

    Liked by 1 person

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